tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post3177569579453368357..comments2021-12-18T21:22:20.643-05:00Comments on Larry Hammersley: I've pasted in my short Unspoken LoveLarry Hammersleyhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02374373137478765952noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-75580863619044073562010-12-17T15:44:23.373-05:002010-12-17T15:44:23.373-05:00Beautiful! So visual. I wish I could write descrip...Beautiful! So visual. I wish I could write description the way you do. <br /><br />It's a form of poetry I lack. But I'm glad you have this gift. That way I can enjoy it.Laurean Brookshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06242693739806417138noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-61935555465947039042010-12-17T12:46:48.440-05:002010-12-17T12:46:48.440-05:00HI Larry,
I'm late (as always seems to be the ...HI Larry,<br />I'm late (as always seems to be the case lately), but I'm here. LOL<br /><br />I loved your short piece and felt like I was experiencing the warmth of their love right along with your couple. This proves once again that "sweet" romance can be heady and emotion-filled if written well.Rebecca J Vickeryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00546468496288447253noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-81559733417865154002010-12-17T08:53:27.866-05:002010-12-17T08:53:27.866-05:00Hi Anne, Miss Mae, Gail and Celia: Thanks for comi...Hi Anne, Miss Mae, Gail and Celia: Thanks for coming by my blog. Your comments are most appreciated as always. I must confess the sign, tree, flowers and bricks were taken from a postcard I chose for the writing assignment in the seminar. It was a rapid writing assignment and when I got home I cleaned it up and sent it to Allromanceebooks for their free read. What a neat idea, Celia about poetry. I don't understand free verse and my rhyming poetry doesn't adhere to meter, etc. very well. I've written poetry to my wife, my late mother and I think to my daughter-in-law. Not sure of that one but perhaps I need to write her one this Christmas.Larry Hammersleyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02374373137478765952noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-56201497803293126822010-12-16T15:50:23.155-05:002010-12-16T15:50:23.155-05:00Very Poetic, Larry. You could, you now, make the s...Very Poetic, Larry. You could, you now, make the story into poetry.With such beautiful descriptions that put us right in the scene, you have created a lovely story. CeliaAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16272417114895975742noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-31714790318853613182010-12-16T14:01:04.057-05:002010-12-16T14:01:04.057-05:00Hi Larry,
I like your story very much.Hi Larry,<br />I like your story very much.Gail Pallottahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05867438154973036168noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-70094402358060668632010-12-16T12:06:27.222-05:002010-12-16T12:06:27.222-05:00Really nice. I love this one. :)Really nice. I love this one. :)Miss Maehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12245580913844186039noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-753604405397586796.post-50639784216585676642010-12-16T10:45:27.001-05:002010-12-16T10:45:27.001-05:00Beautiful piece, Larry! You do such a wonderful j...Beautiful piece, Larry! You do such a wonderful job with description.Anne Patrickhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03987589478553339355noreply@blogger.com