I have finished a new story of 39,000 words. It is a college romance, clean.  I must rename it since Harry has fallen for a different woman than originally planned.  My first title is More Than A Sister and originally he was supposed to fall for Marla but wound up falling for Ellen, a brilliant aeronautical engineering student.  They meet at a sorority party and she is lonely, no one interested in inviting her to bring someone to the party.  Harry falls for her almost immediately.  Marla's part is to make sure Harry is happy.  She has Ron who is interested in her.  The story covers mostly Harry and Ellen's budding romance but is she a career woman and does she have time for Harry in her life?  She s inconsistent in her treatment of Harry.  After their college graduations she takes a job in New York and Harry is in California.  How can their relationship develop when they are two thousand miles apart?